Tuesday 26 April 2011

A Smelly Bathroom by Nelisa

A Smelly Bathroom

Drip, drip, drip the water spitted from my togs as I got out  of  the pool, I shivered from the  cold as I followed my sisters  to the  bathroom to have a shower.  I felt happy to get out of the pool because I was feeling a little bit hungry.  Rumble, rumble, rumble went my tummy.

I got my towel, soap and conditioner and I went in the shower.  I opened the door and my eyes fell on the floor, to my surprise I saw a kaka .  It looked like a brown long snake with yellow bits of corn in it.  It was disgusting, it made me feel like spewing up.  My little sister Salina stepped on the stinky kaka because she ran in without looking.
"Ooh yucky kaka!" said Salina

By Nelisa