Sunday, 1 May 2011

WATCH YOU STEP!

'Watch your Step!' said the sign as we stepped carefully onto the ferry. The sun was shining like white nivia cream and it was a girls day out. I went with Mrs Logan, my sisters and mum but her real name is Jenny Mahon ha ha!

The boat was moving like a slow whale. Me and my sisters took pictures and we had awesome fun.
The big blue waves went swish swish swish.
"This is fun!" said my cheeky sister Salina. We all laughed!
We were very proud of our sister Salina because she was a good girl.

By Nelisa

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 May 2011 at 09:18

    Another great story Nelisa-Ailini...Lucky girl to see the whales!!

    Keep writing more stories...

    U.Kielo

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  2. Anonymous2 May 2011 at 19:47

    That was beautiful Nelisa, it looks like you had an awesome holiday looking forward to seeing you at school in term 2.

    Mrs Fa'alava'au

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  3. Anonymous2 May 2011 at 19:49

    Hi Nelisa!
    Looks like you had a great time with your family. I'm really proud of you! This is such a wonderful story, its interesting and a clever piece of writing. Well done!!!

    Mrs Gill

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