Hoopslammers slam Reremoana
Yippee its game time! I waited with anticipation for my mum to blow her whistle... hohoho! My heart leapt, it was beating really fast. I ran to catch the ball from the center pass. My tummy was full of butterflies because I was so nervous.
Quickly I passed the bouncy netball to Sipa. I wondered will she catch it?
Suddenly the ref said, “contact Reremoana’s ball!”
I felt so sorry for my friend Sipa because we missed our chance to score a goal.
I thought to myself I should get the ball back. Suddenly Lucile leaped out of nowhere like she was on a trampoline. She intercepted the ball and quickly threw it to the GS. Everybody held their breath.
Jade the GS took a deep breath, bent her legs and took a shot for the goal.
“Yippeeee!" Everybody shouted as Jade got the winning goal in. Hoopslammers 17-16.
I like descriptive writing Nelisa.
ReplyDeleteWell done. Love Aunty Ula
Well Done Nelisa-Ailini...Congrats to your team!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Whanau,
ReplyDeleteGreat Story, thank you Nelisa for allowing me to use this in shared writing today. I look forward to seeing more great work from you.
Naku noa
Whaea Hepa
what excellent writing skills you have Nelisa...you're a budding young reporter...look out aunty Marama..he he love aunty Kiren
ReplyDeletethank-u guys for saying that and i love u guys all
ReplyDeletexoxo by nelisa